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Francis Dupont wrote:
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for
> draft-miller-media-type-cellml-03.txt
> For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
> <http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html>.
>
Hi Francis,

Thanks for the review. Please see my inlined comments below.
> Please resolve these comments along with any other
> Last Call comments you may receive.
>
> Summary: ready
>
> Some little comments/suggestions which can be handled in AUTH48:
> the case of Format/format is not uniform, I propose Format everywhere
> if it is really a part of the name, or Format the first time and format
> for further cases, or format.
>
I have changed all appearances of "Format" to "format", except in the
phrase "CellML Umbrella Format Registry" (which is the correct case, as
per the specification). I will be submitting a revised draft to correct
this shortly.
> in 3: mathmatical -> mathematical
>
This was fixed unintentionally in draft-miller-media-type-cellml-04,
which has not yet been processed by the IETF secretariat.
> As the style is native (i.e,, not American) English I propose in 4 for
> Author/Change "shall" in place of "will" in "... itself will not change ."
>
As the CellML Umbrella 1.0 specification is a non-IETF document, I don't
believe shall or SHALL is appropriate in this case. However, the CellML
team has endorsed the document, meaning that any future work will result
in a new document with an increased version number. The phrase is
therefore a statement of fact rather than a command, and so "will" is
more appropriate than "shall".

Best regards,
Andrew Miller

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• [cellml-discussion] review of draft-miller-media-type-cellml-03.txt, Andrew Miller, 07/04/2006

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